It's bland, generic... but I'd forgive it if it wasn't for the blurb. Using a copypasta to explain the setting of the game is what manuals are for, the blurb would want to reel you in.
How about...
"200 years after the end of Goku's tale Earth finds itself under attack by the evil forces of Miira. Remnants of both the World Trade Organization and the Red Ribbon Army are set to rule with an iron fist.
Join the Dragon World with <random number> other players online and embark on a journey of your own. Travel to the past to aid the original Dragon Ball cast and help them bring a stop to the new threat in Dragon Ball Online.
It's what you wished for."
I'm not too good at writing, but you can see where I went with that. I covered the basic plot and then informed the reader that not only can they embark on their own epic tale, but they can also encounter the cast from the original manga and aid them.
Also, change the font colour of the terms on the back, white on white is nigh impossible to read.
Doesnt really look like a legit game boxart.Good try though.Pictures need to be changed,along with some more in game screenshots,and descriptions on the back about features.
298