On youtube I have made a new fan made show called Life in shadwtale made by me so can you guys tell me your thoughts on my Offical preview.

Well first off I'd like to point out some directing issues.

The camera should only focus on the game. There should be a custom option of how much you can record. This will be better for the viewers as they don't want to see the background of your computer

Also the script was poorly written, use better grammar.

Now for the actual preview and the storyline.

This is a hardcore Mary Sue character. He was reincarnated, and is now on his way to becoming a hero. Also I'm not sure if in this game it is like this, but lions and tigers rarely meet in the while (Asia has such a low lion population that they usually segregate themselves from the other carnivores). Also, if you are raised by a tiger, you are much stronger then a lion, because lions (well the lionesses) hunt in packs while the lion sits around. A tiger is a lone hunter, making them stronger than an individual lion.

Thanks I'll redo it and put it in this thread when I get a chance but If you see my Channel on youtube you would think this video is the best of ALL my videos infact it is a million times better than the other one. the only reason my grammer Isn't really good Because I let my brother write the script. Well only because of the thought that was popping in my head saying"Well I should let him do it because he found where the HyperCam was Anyway so i guess were now even if I let..."

Sorry about the sound. As you can see on the top of my computer I have a windows 2000 and about a year ago it stopped working and freezes up. i use my brothers computer to play dbo so when I get a new computer I will have to start all over. Again!

Oh,and I also made another preveiw that I will post. Maybe tomorow. And for now on When I have a new episode I'll put that in dbocom.com so I see what you thnk of it.

It's uploading rght now on youtube so it shouldn't be long now...but anyway it would help me if someone could help me come up with ideas of some sort so does any body have an Idea just throw them at me y'all. I'm serious,I need Ideas. If you want to be in one just say where you wanna meet at.

Things You Need To Have In Order To Be In A Episode:
Name of place you want to meet up at.
Type what you wanna do in the episode.(In this Forum.)

Things To Do When I'm Recording:
When you want to say something do this:<your Shadowtale name>:blah blah blah.
Try not to act Ghetto.
Don't use text talk to much.
Try to act like the other players are just villagers

Aplications Due By 03/06/11

Your logic with tigers and lions really isn't sound if you ask me. I don't think they'd be any stronger depending on which animal they were raised by. (which begs the question, why would a tiger raise a kid anyway? Sure there are reports of kids being raised by wolves, but wolves are pack hunters, where as tigers are solitary ones) They'd probably be the same as pretty much any kid with any sort of animal "parents." And speaking of which, being raised by animals would likely make them behave like an animal. And further more, even if a human is raised by animals, they're still only a human. No human being (Chuck Norris does not count as human) could hold a candle to a lion anyway.

Now, regarding the video itself, there are a few things I should note. For one, keep the game so that it's full screen and we can't see your web browser. No need for it, and it just clutters the screen. Second, cut out unnecessary footage, such as starting the game up. Third, please, please, please, please, please type properly. You look like an uneducated moron if you're a native English speaker and can't type a proper sentence. Now, I have met uneducated morons before, but at the very least, they can usually speak with relative coherence...

Also, yes, keep Mary Sue syndrome in mind. Get your character to pass this quiz for a start. Also, do your homework on reincarnation. When someone's reincarnated, they're born in a different body, as opposed to simply waking up in a different body that's fully grown, as seems to be the case in this.

Also, get some skills editing videos so you can make transitions as opposed to typing things in word documents at the very end.

If your asking why would the tiger raise him, well every thing that has happened to him was planed to happen any way but that is my old preview. My computer accidently shut down on me so it is upload in this minute.

Kiyza,like I said to the Infamous I let my brother do it since he found the hypercam in the first place. So thats why the grammer isn't good. I mean hes ownly a second grader.